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AMI
January 8th, 2008, 06:01 PM
As we walk the the peir
u hand me a beer
as I sip my drink
I think
should I do it right now
should I do it right here?
do I dare to do this with u so near
I figure what the hell
and slowly raise my gun
sofly wispering
I'll always love u hun
as I pull my trigger
it goes off with a bang
the cold steal built
slowly sores through my brain
I no longer have to try
to fit in in school
or try to conform
to what others call cool
I no longer have to be the best
or work to pass
lifes fucked up test
So this is my mesage
as well as my end
think about it!
See u soon my friend!

~Ami Aprox. 11/1996

Godgrave
January 8th, 2008, 08:57 PM
That's ... depressing.

Ladywriter
January 9th, 2008, 09:12 AM
exceedingly so :p
Silly rabbit, you should know I gave up suicide poetry after high school.

AMI
January 14th, 2008, 05:29 PM
Yah i know but what can i say it was a depressing time! It still came out good i guess most of my best writing is shit i wrote when i was all messed up cause of my life being shity!