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Mathias
December 27th, 2007, 10:25 PM
I was recently asked to write a short poem with a simple writing scheme about wise women for a croning ceremony. I used the following website as a learning tool and for my inspiration.

http://www.croning.org/pages/534083/index.htm

I recommend reading the poem first and then read the meanings in the spoilers afterwards. I have received praise for the poem from all the wise women in my life and thought I should share it with my friends here as well.

Wise Women by Andrew Hinkle

First verse

The sun descends near mountains west,
Accept your shadow before night's rest.

Meaning: The natural cycle of life is nearing its end. Acknowledge age and be proud of it.

Cycle: maiden (beginning), mother (middle), and crone (end).


The moon has waxed its final reign,
Settle down through its eternal wane.

Meaning: Symbolic, if not physical, end of a woman's monthly cycle.

Spirits radiant in sky stars bright,
Peel away clouds for maiden's sight.

Meaning: Elderly women pass on their infinite knowledge to the next generation.

Seal away dreaded seasons fall and winter,
Release anew fountains spring and summer.

Meaning: Toss aside doubts and worries. Harness the power of wisdom and experience.

Second verse

Stray not from the derelict flock lost
Lead the herd to meadows long sought.

Meaning: Lead people to a brighter future without stubbornly sticking to the past. Heal the people by resolving differences.

Welcome in each to nest of safe haven,
Feed the precious apple souls do raven.

Meaning: Share knowledge, wisdom, and experience with any who should listen.

Song and verse tell lessons learned,
Weave a story experience hard earned.

Meaning: Culture and tradition were historically passed orally to children through women.

Scattered seeds sown in memory's deep cage,
Blossom fruits to nourish aspiring attache.

Meaning: Women are the nurturer's of the earth. Crones are wise, because of their past experiences.

Ladywriter
December 28th, 2007, 02:58 PM
if only real women were as warm n fuzzy as you think they are.... nawww *hits Mathis with a bag of bricks n runs away* X'D

Mathias
December 28th, 2007, 09:50 PM
Wow, I think I just lost my innocence! X'D