Something I just threw together

[Gelmir_of_the_crows]

I'm leaving now
I'll be gone for awhile
When I return I'd like to see your smile

If your not there I'll understand
Not everyone can stand
with time at hand

I don't expect for them
to know what I say

It's you that makes me want to stay

My words may be soft
My phrases
not aways so good

What I what from this is simple
A smile
A grin
A small laugh
and I win.

[Kelene]

Very nice, your rhymes are creative. Great job

[Gelmir_of_the_crows]

Thank you. It's not one of my better ones though. I seem to have run out of ideas lately to write on.

[Ladywriter]

cute ^_^

[Gelmir_of_the_crows]

thanks. :D

[HKofsesshoumaru]

Nice. I like that last line.

[Moon Doggie]

*claps* wow

[Gelmir_of_the_crows]

That last line fits me as per that phrase. I thought that it could use that little touch.