Press Play

[Hell_Cat_18]

Press Play:

It's raining again
Do you hear it, can you see
Or, are you blind and def as you are to me
Days fly by, speeding past in their pause
Following Murphy's Law and every clause
Press play and hit the stop
Hurry, while we're still on top
Rent me a room on floor thirteen
Fastforward to our senseless routine
Drive by's and bullets to souls
Shot from the barrel of an assasin's role
Rewind in a fool's desperate hope
To escape the nuse made of memories rope
Music consoles and rips wounds anew
Notes falling like blood from a sky so blue
Press play and watch the story be told
Of a love like fire that froze in the cold
Rented rooms and lies filled with rues
Senseless routines as an empty muse
Thirteen floors and hit the stop
Freeze in time the image of love on top
Fastforward and skip the tragic end
Of hearts to broken to ever mend
A single tear to hit rewind
Back to the begining, to that beautiful broken mind
Press play...and watch as the days fly by...

[CabbitGirl]

wow. i dont even know what to say o.o that was really really good HC! great job! ^^

[Hell_Cat_18]

Thanx Cabbit, it's kinda funny I was working on editing my Myspace when this just popped into my head. *huggles* :happy:

[CabbitGirl]

hehe it always happens like that X'D just kinda pops in your head =3 you're very welcome =^_^= :hug:

[falling-angel-111]

wow that was like the best I'd read in a while. it never got boring and nothing sounded out of place it was just perfect. awesome work.

[Hell_Cat_18]

Awww...thanx you two! *huggles* :happy:

[COBRA]

:clap: very well done, i can see it, as one of those poems, read with every word said aloud, said froceful, and with meaning, fiting perfectly in to each verse.

your poem got across it's message very well, and nothing of the poem seemed cliche, in term's of "rhyme's" which can be really difficult to use something else, then the normal, so other's can understand, rather then painting an image with words.
like you did.
very good!

[Mathias]

I wish I could rewind and watch my kids growing up again. Their 3 and 1.5, and the remote seems like it's stuck on the fast forward button. I hope I can find the play button before I find myself crying on the rewind button too.

[Hell_Cat_18]

Thanx guys, and I don't have children yet Mathias, but I know that my rents were saying the other day that they couldn't believe how fast I had grown up. While they were sad that I was no longer a child, they said they were so proud of the woman I had become.