~Shine On~

[Hell_Cat_18]

~Shine On~

Time cuts short all that is right
Stealing all away from the light
Red on white
Forever staining the blood with light
Keep me safe and tight
Never let my broken wings take flight
Everything is wrong with right
Pay to see this broken bloody sight
Stay here with me till dawn’s early light
Promise you’ll stay and hold me tight

Lost forever holding my own
Keeping the light I tried so hard to hold
Veins bleed with blood and gold
Loneliness cuts to the bone
I’m lost forever
My heart was your’s for never
Smile empty soul
Shine on you crazy diamond
Fly me to the moon and back
No one will miss us
They’ll never notice that were gone
Together we’ll sing our broken song

Laughter cruel and breaking fast
I’m lost forever at last
Although it’s the end
I have no regrets
My end is my release
Finally I am at peace
Cast into fire and brimstone for all eternity
Gone forever from the holy trinity
Father, son and holy spirit
My judgment they gave
This place will forever be my grave
Pain and sorrow mix as one
Regrets...I have but one...

[Torreyjs]

is that a poem or song?
OR lyrical poetry?
and btw its gangster (good)

[Hell_Cat_18]

It's a song I wrote, but I also used some lyrics in there from other songs. They have special meaning to me, and to the person I wrote it for. :happy:

Smile Empty Soul - The name of a rock band

Shine On You Crazy Diamond - Song by Pink Flyod

Fly Me To the Moon - Song by Frank Sinatra

[CabbitGirl]

it was very good hell cat =)

[Hell_Cat_18]

Thanx Cabbit, I love how you always appreciate my work whether it's good or bad. :happy:

[CabbitGirl]

its always good though =^_^= keep up the good work

[Hell_Cat_18]

Thanx Cabbit I'll try :happy: