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Dark's Angel
April 10th, 2006, 02:47 PM
My heart aches
The bloody rain pours down
It reflects what I’m feeling
Tears of blood roll down
my face and hit the ground.
Clenching my eyes shut tight
I try to shut out everything
That wants to hurt me
I feel empty
I feel that something is missing
There’s an emptiness deep
within my soul
My heart is crying
My mind wishes it to stop
The emptiness I feel consumes me
It makes me want to lash out
The tears of blood flow more freely
I cry out in frustration as I
Feel my heart clench in loneliness.
And the tears flow faster
Opening my eyes
As the bloody rain stopped
I looked around and I
Saw that everything was covered in blood.
The emptiness I felt grew
And I knew something
I was alone.

Neo
April 19th, 2006, 11:31 AM
I like it

GundamFreakX
April 19th, 2006, 12:01 PM
Very good, consuming.

Dark's Angel
April 19th, 2006, 06:18 PM
Thanks guys. That means alot.

Hell_Cat_18
April 23rd, 2006, 04:44 PM
Excelent poem, please keep up the good work okay. :happy: