New poems...

[Dark's Angel]

Calming Hearts and Spirits

The blue-green waves splash around my ankles
As I walk down the beach
The roar of the ocean waves calms me
but my mind still is a turbulent mess.
I go for a swim among the fish to calm my spirit
But that doesn't work either.
I try sunbathing with my friends
To calm my crying heart
But that fails too.
Is there anything that will help me?
My heart is crying but I really don't know why.
Is it because you left me?
I keep telling myself it was for the best.
My spirit is restless
And my mind is a mess right now.
My mind is urging me to go somewhere
I'm not sure where to go.
I'll be on the road until
My heart stops crying
And my spirit settles.

Alone
The darkness of the shadows
The eerie mist that clings in the darkness
What is going to happen?
The full moon is hanging overhead
And I'm all alone
The hooting of the owls
And the rustling of the leaves
Makes it even more evident
That you left and that no one's here for me.
I wonder if there's anyone else like me
Alone wandering, staring at the moon
Wondering why they were left
Wondering why they were now alone too.

[CabbitGirl]

:clap: those were very good =^_^=

[Dark's Angel]

Thanks. I wrote them when I was feeling a little down and the words just came out.

[D_Marx]

Pretty. I could feel everything you projected. Don't forget to talk about it later so we can bash the bastard who made you sad.

[Honeybee]

My mind is urging me to go somewhere
^ that was the strongest line in your first poem

it drives completly mad, because its such a burning notion that you cant regect that can run you up the wall. because while you wish for it to leave it will stay binding you almost crushing you driving you into a panic because you can not answer it it has to die away and it devors you slowly

do you really live near a forest of some sort that you wander in?

[Dark's Angel]

Something like that but not quite. There's a big wooded area by my house that I wander around in sometimes. It's just woods that I live by but I'd love to live near the real forest...

[Honeybee]

what do you see when you hear the word alone?

do you see a moon?
do you see a person wondering the same thing as you?
do you see darkness?
do you see light?

I see mist

what do you see?

[Dark's Angel]

I see a mix of things when I hear the word alone. I see a lonely person, the moon, darkness, sometimes the stars, and mist. My imagination gets warped sometimes with some words...

[Honeybee]

try writting what you see insted of what you know as the ideal image of alone

[Dark's Angel]

Most of the time I write what I feel but that would be a different way to write...

[Honeybee]

seeing is still feeling