A couple Poems

[Dark's Angel]

Dark Reminder of You

The dark sky and stars
Remind me of what we used to do
We always had fun but
That suddenly changed
Why did you betray me?
Why did you go to her?
We were always happy
Why did you leave me?
The ocean splashes around my ankles
and I look out and see a sea of endless black
All I can be reminded of is you
Why did you have to go?
I loved you and you left me
I'll be better of without you now
You changed a lot when you went to her
Everything is a dark reminder of you
Everything.


Remember

Do I know you?
I don't know who you are
I don't remember you
Quit calling my name
I won't answer
I see you staring at me
Quit following me
I don't remember you
Lost in the fog
Of my forgotten memories
I don't remember you
Have you forgottten me?
Do you still love me?
I finally femember you.

[CabbitGirl]

those are cool =^_^= thats good. theres a sight you can put poems on. if youre interested i can give you the link

[Dark's Angel]

Thanks. ^^ What one? I already have them Both posted on Deviant Art under Darks-Angel-90.

[Dark's Angel]

I got bored again...I seem to either write or draw...here's another. When I get another scanner I share some of my fan art and my original art with you guys...

Goodbye

The sky darkens.
Your presence fades.
I always end up alone.
Can't some one like me for me?
Cant some one stay with me?
Am I repulsive?
Am I unworthy of frienship?
Everyone that tries to get close to me,
usually has an alterior motive.
Why can't someone be my friend?
Why can't someone not use me for their own gain?
I'm through with being someone else's toy.
You're never gonna see me again.
You're never going to get the chance,
to use me for you own personal gain.
This is goodbye to all the pain and sadness.
This is goodbye to you.
Sayonara.

[Dark's Angel]

I wrote this one tuesday.

A Broken Heart

The tears stream down my face
As I look at your retreating form
You say It can never work out
That we can never be together
Why did you lead me on?
Why did you make me think you
had feelings for me?
I've come to accept your love of my twin and my one true best friend
But your betrayal is something
I cannot forgive.
My feelings for you are slowly turning to
Hatred.

[CabbitGirl]

thats very good! (why i didnt see the other one before is beyond me but eh.)

keep up the good work =^_^=

btw. the site is www.allpoetry.com (http://www.allpoetry.com) . some of mine are there under CabbitGirl.

[Honeybee]

Dark Reminder of You

I'll be better of without you now
You changed a lot when you went to her
Everything is a dark reminder of you
Everything.

^ it seemed like your poem started like the first line and clearly representing that then suddenly changed at the last moment to a different view. I would like to hear more on that view

Remember
i like this one it seems simple but i cant shake of the feeling that theres more...

Goodbye
i think you should spice this one up a bit more


A Broken Heart
ditto

i like how you ask youself questions in your writting its kind of becoming your signature but i would like to see you branch out from that work as well