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Kuwabara
October 21st, 2005, 10:17 PM
I didnt know if I should post this in wonderland random or room 4. So I decided to post it here...
The Ancient Clan
Cast
The Screen names I chose to play each role doesn’t mean anything or any specific role I think someone as. Its simply your SN sounds like that role nothing more so enjoy.
Kuwabara
Dudeman
Sledgestone
Ladywriter
Saiel
Cabbitgirl
KiKi
Dubird
Honeybee
Strider Hiryu
Slippers
Hellcat_18
GodGrave
Gundamranger X
Falling_Angel_111
Azreal
Sabe
Eppy
Princess tasha
Deathscythe X
Akira 13
Daymost
Flying Monkey
Miyu
Camron
Aora
Cfioncn
Story
600 years ago there was the greatest war ever fought. The war was so malevolent that in was fought between everyone in the world… When it seemed the most perilous a band emerged known as the ANCIENT CLAN. The Clan was a fierce force and swept through the land being lead by the mighty Sledgestone. Sledge and his men were swift in driving the forces of darkness out of the world. During an earth shattering battle with the dark lord Godgrave, Sledgestone ended up victorious at the cost of his power. He was drained completely of all power by sealing up Godgrave. The Ancient clans members took the slumbering body of Sledgestone and sealed it away. The location of his body was entrusted on one person, the wisest member of the Clan… Lady Dubird. To keep the world a safe place the clan dispersed each member going his or her separate ways to guard over a region. Now more than half a millennia later the Dark Lord Godgrave has re emerged and swallowed the world in darkness once again. Now without its hero and the Ancient Clan dispersed what will become of the world?
The Present
In the village Pavilion… a riot seems to have broken out in the center of the village.
“Yo! Dudeman! What’s going on? Why is there a riot? Come on tell me!” Kuwa came running out of his house towards his friend.
“I don’t know Kuwa, seems to be something with that old cook that lives on the outskirts of town…” Dudeman replied awaiting his friend.
“You mean old man Strider? What possibly could he be getting his self into? Especially with rumor of the X squad coming here. Dammit that old man has finally snapped!” Kuwa running past his friend towards the riot.
The Two ran towards the commotion, they saw two tall dark figures surrounding the old man. The two had a huge blood red X on each of there torso. They began to push the old man between them two as if playing catch. Then the more malevolent looking one looked out at the crowd.
“I am Deathscythe X! Chief warrior of Lord Godgrave, milord has sent me to show every village in the region the cruelty that comes with disobeying the will of Godgrave!! My first victim shall be this poor defenseless old man! Anyone oppose? Speak now and be killed as well!” The man burst out in a sadistically type of laughter.
He balled up his fist as it transformed into a long rapier, then the single blade as if defusing now became three blades. His associate grabbed a hold of the old man so he wouldn’t run away. Deathscythe X pushed his blade towards the man’s torso then a loud “STOP!!” was heard from the crowd. DX halted and looked as the crowd all backed away from the boy.
Kuwa was left standing alone with only Dudeman next to him who inched away while Kuwa wasn’t looking. DX chuckled as he walked over to the boy and lifted his head began to examine the “child’s” face.
“Who the hell do you think you are BOY?!” DX howled as spit flew from his mouth into the boys face.
“I-I- I am Kuwa…bara, a local in this town and a friend of Old man Strider… I don’t like what you two are doing one bit. Why don’t you two pick on someone your own size? Why pick on a defenseless old man? Don’t you guys have any sort of respect for you eld-“
DX slapped the boy to the ground. And kicked him into the air only to knock him back down.
“Listen Boy, your insolence will not be tolerated I will kill you now! Then the old man and anyone else who dares question us!”
DX raised the boy up with his normal hand and readies the bladed hand. He first begins to lightly cut Kuwa as blood begins to drip from the boys body DX howled another laughter. He then began to lightly impale the blades into the boy’s body and jerked it into the boy’s stomach. Avoiding any vital organs as the boy screamed of pain the blood from his stomach came out of his mouth. Dripping from his mouth the blood fell to his chin and down his neck.
The spectators stood there and watched him getting killed; Dudeman could not take this anymore. Picking up a rock Dudeman chucked it at DX, at the blink of an eye DX was in his face and transforming his other hand into a rapier. With Kuwa going along for the ride as his inside jerked from that fast movement was loosing more blood. He was about to impale Dudeman until the old man spoke up.
“Stop this nonsense sonny boy… You came after me now come get me…” The tall man behind him jerked him but then was sent soaring into the air. The old man shook violently as he shed his skin… Underneath was a young looking man about the age of 25. The man leaped into the air and landed near DX. Pulling out the boy from the man’s rapier he handed him to Dudeman.
“I am Strider… Strider Hiryu!!!”
The whole crowd gasped at what the man said. Whispered could be heard among the crowd. “The Strider Hiryu of the ancient clan?!?!”
Deathscythe X looked at the man and grinned.
“This shall be fun… I always wanted to fight someone in you caliber… If you indeed are the Great Strider Hiryu…”
TO BE CONTINUED
dudeman
October 21st, 2005, 10:33 PM
Wow man that was good i could have been a tad dumber though.
Kuwabara
October 21st, 2005, 10:48 PM
But I didnt potray you as that. I personally so far Like how I am working DX so far. I am writing the continuation as we speak. Guess who was holding Strider...
CabbitGirl
October 21st, 2005, 11:02 PM
oo i like it so far =^_^=
Saiel
October 21st, 2005, 11:14 PM
You put dudeman / daymost in it but not me? I refuse to read it. -_-;
Kuwabara
October 21st, 2005, 11:16 PM
Saiel You are in it Part of the AC double check the list, maybe you didnt see it right.
dudeman
October 21st, 2005, 11:32 PM
You put dudeman / daymost in it but not me? I refuse to read it. -_-; For the last time me and daymost are two different people :x .
Saiel
October 21st, 2005, 11:43 PM
Saiel You are in it Part of the AC double check the list, maybe you didnt see it right.
Wait, you edited it right after you made that post. Did you just add my name? X'D
Kuwabara
October 21st, 2005, 11:59 PM
Damn sold out by the Last edited by message.^_^: But seriously Saiel I thought your name was on there. I got some nice character development that involves you;)
Princess Tasha
October 22nd, 2005, 09:06 AM
More more more!!! Please? ^_^
falling-angel-111
October 22nd, 2005, 10:31 AM
i thought it was great i cant wait for more
Fedic
October 22nd, 2005, 12:27 PM
So Dx is a villan? ^_^;
Dark's Angel
October 22nd, 2005, 12:32 PM
This is really good so far. ^^
Kuwabara
October 22nd, 2005, 12:33 PM
Yup he is and More is coming. here is a little preview of whats in stores next.
“Hmm, seems you are skeptic of my power… I will just have to show you that the Ancient Clan is not a clan to be dealt with skepticism!”
Strider dashed towards DX and leaped into the air spinning, Strider landed behind DX.
“Zaku, Zeong, Sazabi!” Striders hand glow an awesome red light.
daymost
October 22nd, 2005, 01:20 PM
For the last time me and daymost are two different people :x .
Ya I am the wield one and dudeman is normal one:meh:
You put dudeman / daymost in it but not me? I refuse to read it -_-;
Hay why is so bad that me or dudeman to be in it:x
But it like it so far Kuwabara:bigthumb:
Gundam-Ranger-X
October 22nd, 2005, 01:28 PM
But I didnt potray you as that. I personally so far Like how I am working DX so far. I am writing the continuation as we speak. Guess who was holding Strider...
I'm going to guess Falling_Angel:meh:
Kuwabara
October 22nd, 2005, 02:38 PM
I'm going to guess Falling_Angel:meh:
LOL, your warm X'D
Godgrave
October 22nd, 2005, 03:07 PM
Pretty snazzy ^_^ *thumbs up*
Kuwabara
October 22nd, 2005, 03:21 PM
Thanks Darlorkd X'D
Sledgstone
October 22nd, 2005, 04:10 PM
thats pretty good so far. ^_^
“Who the hell do you think you are BOY?!” DX howled as spit flew from his mouth into the boys face.
:spit:
Azrael
October 22nd, 2005, 04:19 PM
X'D Godgrave as a villain, huh...
Camron
October 22nd, 2005, 05:12 PM
Haha.. I'll read it later :p
But skimming through It looked pretty decent actaully.
Kuwabara
October 22nd, 2005, 08:40 PM
:happy: Thank you everyone here is the continuation of it. Godgrave as a Villain X'D. Azreal you are also a Villain X'D.
“Hmm, seems you are skeptic of my power… I will just have to show you that the Ancient Clan is not a clan to be dealt with skepticism!”
Strider dashed towards DX and leaped into the air spinning, Strider landed behind DX.
“Zaku, Zeong, Sazabi!” Striders hand glow an awesome red light. Many of the spectators shielded their eyes from the blinding light. DX felt an immense heat growing from his back then in a flash the light engulfed him. Seconds later DX was fired into the air flying several yards before crashing down into the ground. A small crater could be seen as the smoked cleared. Getting up then dusting his self off DX smiled a bit spitting out a wad of blood.
“Seems you have some tricks up your sleeve after all Strider.” As if a blur DX was right in front of Strider. Using the tri rapier he began an onslaught of attacks as strider defended the other arm came and slashed strider across the upper torso. The blood spewed on DX who seems to glow with delight, leaping backwards DX kicked dirt into the wound. Strider grimacing from the pain closed his eyes for a brief second he would soon regret. Using his unnatural speed DX was again in front of Strider and impaled him with his Rapier hands.
“Phase-Shift!” whispered Strider as the blades went into his body then nothing. They did nothing else to the Man. Putting his hands around the blades Strider pulled them out without feeling the slightest pain. As this happened DX’s companion held his hands together, transforming it into a huge cannon. The Cannon fired at the back of Strider it wasn’t a regular shot it was a concentrated spirit shot.
“How soon do you guys forget me…? The second man the lackey the nobody as I am often called. But you fail to see I am greater than all of you can Imagine, I am Gundam Ranger X and I will not be taken lightly!”
Strider began to get up slowly only to be kicked by DX in his wound. GRX fired another cannon shot at the fallen warrior followed by a flurry of kicks by DX.
“Co…me on… help… h-h-h-him.” Kuwa was saying with the little energy he had left. The crowd began to feel obliged as they rushed DX and GRX. Dudeman walked in the middle of this and dragged Strider out of it. Putting Striders arm around his neck and both of them carry Kuwa they made haste.
As the trio limped away from the scene a huge scream of several people could be heard. GRX fired his cannon into the masses while DX quickly beheaded the lot of them. After about one minute DX and GRX were the only two breathing in that whole Village the trio managed to slip out just in time.
“Ranger what say you a toast?” DX lifted one of the decapitated heads and gave it to GRX while he picked up another for his self. “Whatever you say, though I don’t think this is hygienic.” Replied GRX the two hit the heads together. DX took his head and turned it over upon his own head as the blood fell onto him, GRX did the same thing then an in instant they were off.
The trio was making their way towards the next village. Dudeman was getting tired he was practically carrying them both. He looked for shelter and found it near a huge boulder.
“Kuwa, Strider we will be spending the night here can you to last?” Dudeman asked his companions.
“Y-y-yeah sur…e I ca…n” Kuwa then closed his eyes and was now in a state of slumber.
“I am fine, by dawn my body and injuries should be healed. All I need is rest, when I am well I will be able to heal your friend. For now I will rest and regain my strength it’d be wise for you to watch our bodies. So just stay up the night and tomorrow morning I will rejuvenate you, but for now I rest.” Strider laid his back against the bolder and was fast asleep.
Dudeman took to his role and watched their bodies for the night as they rested.
DEEP IN THE DARKFORTRESS OF GODGRAVE…
“Lord Godgrave, It seems DX and GRX have totaled the village you sent them to. It seems they met someone from the Ancient Clan.”
Godgrave looked at the man with his glowing red eyes. “Bring them here! GRX and DX!” Godgrave said nothing more and awaited. He isn’t the type that likes to talk a lot. He believes that people don’t deserve the grace of hearing him talk for to long.
Deathscythe X and Gundam Ranger X walked in bowing to Godgrave. GG looked at the two in a manner that said Explain yourselves without him having to say a word.
“Well Sire, I guess by now you have heard the rumor of us running into Strider Hiryu of the Ancient Clan. Sir all statistics and scientifically correct answers point to him being dead. I personally with my Cannon leveled the entire city, with the wounds that Deathscythe gave him there is no way he could’ve escaped in time.” Gundam Ranger X told his Master with a slight worried tone in his voice.
“So you have no sufficient proof of his death.” Flames could be seen coming from Godgrave’s Eyes.
“Lord Godgrave! We may not have killed him now but the next encounter with him will end him. I swear! I will bring you his head no need to loose your cool sire.” Deathscythe said this looking at Godgrave’s angry eyes.
DX turned his back and left the room followed by GRX.
“Seems Deathscythe has an arrogance problem… I might have to correct him...” Godgrave whispered to himself.
Outside of GG’s chambers the two X brethren walked together.
“Ranger Lord Godgrave and his Idiocy are beginning to get on my last nerves. I might have to kill him; I can no longer bare it…” DX said sternly to his companion.
“Deathscythe surely you know that we are no where near Lord Godgrave in power. I mean we could probably cause a devastating blow to his forces but him himself we re not match. Wipe such silly thoughts from you mind before you end up getting us killed.” GRX replied to his friend.
“Whatever you say, but soon if all goes according to plan and Master Eppy of the Belkin Woodlands deliver‘s we shall be the ones giving out orders.” DX replied before using his incredible speed to zoom out of there.
“…” GRX said nothing and followed with his speed.
THE BREAK OF DAWN…
Dudeman’s head began to lower as he could feel himself slipping into the cold grips of Dream world. His head fell forward and closing his eyes he was out.
“At least you lasted ‘till morning. I commend you for that but no time for resting now.” Strider awoke feeling greatly restored. He mumbled something over Dudeman’s head who seemed to get up as though he had been sleeping for hours.
“So what about him, sir can you heal him?” Dudeman pointed towards his friend who is lying on the ground. The blood dried up on the boy skin and clothing, though the wound still looked fresh along with the other scratches.
“Don’t worry I will handle it, I haven’t done this kind of heeling in about 600 years. But its worth a crack. Lah-Lah Sune grant me your strength! Mend this mans skin heal his wounds!”
Purple lights swarmed around the mages hands it was as if the world itself began to bend to his will. Kuwa’s body levitated now with the purple light around him. The blood vanished as his wounds began to close up. In one final eye blinding light Kuwa was standing on his two feet.
“Thank you, Strider what should we do now? Our home-village is…” Kuwa fell to his knees as tears rolled from his eyes. The tears rolled down his cheeks slowly then an on pour of tears came from his eyes. “Mo...MOTHER!! FATHER!!! Brother!!! No, NO!!! my family is is is DEAD!!!” Kuwa got up.
He began walking in the direction of the Village. Dudeman who’s family died long ago felt no emotional attachment to the Village. He ran in front of his friend.
“Kuwa, they are dead what can you do about it? Going back you can get killed. The only thing to do is avenge them, kill the X squad I’ll help you…” Dudeman said trying to soothe his friend.
“He is right child, nothing more can be done stop this childish behavior we need to head to the Belkin Woodlands. I know someone there who can help us. She is also a member of the Clan. So Kuwa are you in or out?” Strider began to walk away from the two.
“I will go with you two, to avenge my family…” Kuwa followed Strider, as Dudeman ran after him. The trio began their trek…
In about a day’s walk or two they were nearing the forest. They were tired it was evident if you looked at the posture of the two boys and looking closely at Strider you could see sweat. They found shade under a tree near the forest were they sat.
A Buzz could be heard coming from the forest. First it was faint then it got louder, and louder looking up Dudeman almost freaked at what he saw…
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!
dudeman
October 22nd, 2005, 09:04 PM
Wow man that was awsome even better then before I can't wait till the third chapter is up.
Dark's Angel
October 22nd, 2005, 09:13 PM
That was even better than the first chap! I can't wait for the next one!
falling-angel-111
October 22nd, 2005, 09:38 PM
:clap: OMG i loved it i cant wait to see what happens
CabbitGirl
October 22nd, 2005, 10:35 PM
GAH! you with the cliffhangers!!! who'd he seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ????????
Kuwabara
October 22nd, 2005, 11:27 PM
GAH! you with the cliffhangers!!! who'd he seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ????????
:meh: guess. A clue is they are in a woodlnad area.
Kiki
October 22nd, 2005, 11:59 PM
You add Sassy to the list even though you don't write about and yet I am not in it. I too refuse to read. :p (but seriously though, I refuse... write me in!)
Kuwabara
October 23rd, 2005, 12:17 AM
Kiki!!!!! *glomps* I wrote you in, I dont know how could I not mention you!!!... I am revising the cast list and by tommorrow I will have a fixed list. So If you dont make it on the cast list and want to be penciled in say so and I will give you a cameo. But the names in red will get more than five lines to say :meh:
Oh before I forget let me add Slippers.
Princess Tasha
October 23rd, 2005, 11:24 AM
I wonder what role I will have *ponders*. :happy:
daymost
October 23rd, 2005, 12:36 PM
I wonder what role I will have *ponders*. :happy:
I thing the same thing about me
Wow it got to take a long time to make your book thing but man you are good at it:tup:
Kiki
October 23rd, 2005, 01:15 PM
Of course I want to be in the story. Who DOESN'T want to be in the story? And now that you said I'm in it, I'll read it. :p
Okay, good story. I like it a lot. And I'm concerned about their welfare. Can I be a crazy drifter who drifts crazily from side to side and we never know whose side I'm on?
Mimiru
October 23rd, 2005, 01:43 PM
damn thats getting good ( you sohuld add me [ the unoffical AC nut case] in scene, falling off a cliff)
Aroura
October 23rd, 2005, 02:15 PM
No fair with the suspense! (My name's Aroura btw, not Aora :p )
Miyu
October 23rd, 2005, 03:00 PM
^ ^ very awsome kuwa...cant wait for the 3rd chapter :happy:
CabbitGirl
October 23rd, 2005, 04:16 PM
:meh: guess. A clue is they are in a woodlnad area.
uhh.... might it be a little cabbit? or honeybee? suspense....suspense......
Camron
October 23rd, 2005, 04:32 PM
I keep feeling like I should really read this.. but I keep not having time.. ;^;
.. I will though, when I get a chance.
Kuwabara
October 23rd, 2005, 06:10 PM
uhh.... might it be a little cabbit? or honeybee? suspense....suspense......
Maybe, Maybe not.:meh: Your warm, I'll pencil everyone in cause the story is far from ending. I am thinking 3 or 4 chapters will be in the woodlands. We havent even gotten to the ressurection of Sledgestone, But Lady, Aroura, Saiel, Epy, Cabbit, HB, Flying Monkey and Princess Tasha are coming in the next four chapters. Thats all I am revealing...
OOOOooohh,OOOOooohh guess what kind of food is a delicacy X'D X'D X'D X'D
Aroura
October 23rd, 2005, 10:46 PM
Shrooms? :p
Azrael
October 23rd, 2005, 10:51 PM
Why, toast of course!
Kuwabara
October 23rd, 2005, 11:44 PM
Wrong and Wrong. X'D It's so funny when you think about it X'D
Honeybee
October 24th, 2005, 12:41 AM
.........wait im on the list? NEAT! anyway WHEN THE NEXT PART I MUST KNOW MORE!
Godgrave
October 24th, 2005, 11:01 AM
Hmmm ... let's see ... what's on the menu ... Lizards ? Foxes ? Orks ? Hell, not spiders right ?! But they did sound like cannibals in your second chapter ^_^
Tanoro
October 24th, 2005, 01:37 PM
(Just checking in.)
Kuwa hasn't included me in the fun. I should get my internet connection back soon. I feel like I'm being forgotten. -_-
Saiel
October 24th, 2005, 01:47 PM
Why, toast of course!
Either toast or cranberries would be my guess. :nod:
Aroura
October 24th, 2005, 04:20 PM
It must be cranberries :nod:
EVA-01
October 24th, 2005, 04:23 PM
...Read a bit of it...
I'm not in it... Y_Y;
Azrael
October 24th, 2005, 06:26 PM
It might also be newbies...
Dubird
October 24th, 2005, 06:48 PM
Wisest member of the Clan.....*giggles*.....i'm totally wondering what part i'll have now.....
daymost
October 24th, 2005, 07:35 PM
Wisest member of the Clan.....*giggles*.....i'm totally wondering what part i'll have now.....
I think the wise old fart^_^; but that jus me
Honeybee
October 25th, 2005, 07:56 PM
suspences........killing me!!!!!!!! help!
Kuwabara
October 26th, 2005, 11:40 AM
Tan and Eva how could I forget thee... You'll be included now... I just got the perfect role for both of you:happy: well here is the next arc
The other two jumped to their feet and turned to what he was looking at. Strider began to laugh as Kuwa looked at it in awe.
“H-H-How can you STAY so CALM!!! LOOK AT IT!!!” Dudeman got up and ran behind his two companions. The creature landed on a tree and it stopped flapping its wings.
“Hello my name is Vader; I am a Flying Monkey of the Darth tribe. Who are you? If you are minions on Master Eppy I will kill you were you stand.” The flying simian spoke to the strangers.
“No you misunderstand us, we are travelers from the village southeast of here that was destroyed recently. Surely of you oppose Eppy then you oppose Godgrave as well. So you must know our plight. If what I am telling you means no difference then take my word for it. The word of Strider Hiryu can always be trusted.” Strider told the monkey this.
“Come on you have to believe us. If we were bad we would’ve struck you down the moment we said what you said. Do you believe us?” Kuwa followed striders comment.
“Well I don’t know who this Strider Hiryu is but you seem nice enough, and also I don’t feel like fighting now. If you truly are not my enemies then come on out here is dangerous, come inside to the tribe before Eppy’s spies spot us.” The monkey replied to them all cheery then back flipped, it flapped its wing while entering the forest.
“HOW CAN you just sit here and talk to a monkey!!! Not like any normal monkey but it can FLY! It’s a flying monkey!! That is wrong not just wrong that is SICK and WRONG! Sick and…” While Dudeman was ranting his companions went ahead of him. He quickly ran after them.
“Dudeman there is nothing to worry about; Flying monkeys and other weird creatures are common in these woodlands. They are generally friendly but with Godgrave on the loose I don’t blame them for taking precautionary measures. Kuwa excepted the fact of what he is seeing so should you… to think if this creatures appearance scares you then turn back because in here is nothing but woodland creatures of that caliber.” Strider told him without breaking his stride.
“…”Dudeman said nothing as his eyes were fixed on the Monkeys back.
Kuwa stopped in his tracks, the other two stopped as well following his lead. Looking around his eyes met Strider’s they then shook their heads in unison.
“We’re being followed…”Kuwa told Dudeman.
“Come on out, by the way your breathing you are a creature not human.” Strider was saying as though talking to the forest. Flying monkey stopped moving.
“He moved! Duck Vader!” Kuwa shouted. Flying monkey ducked his head then a sound could be heard from the tree diagonal of him. FM flew towards Strider.
“So it isn’t one of your companions I take it. That would mean it is one of the dark creatures of these woodlands.” Strider commented.
“Yes I think so what should we do??” Flying monkey asked the man while shaking in fear.
“It’s on the move again. But not towards FM this time its heading for me. When I say now. I want anyone to throw something at my head got that.”
Dudeman picked up a few rocks and nodded his head. Strider lifting his index finger and aimed nodding his head. Flying monkey nodded his head. “NOW!” That exact second Kuwa dropped himself to the ground, Dudeman threw a rock at were Kuwa’s head was while Strider fired a small beam shot at where Kuwa’s head was. A loud screech was heard then a thump against a tree.
The four looked towards the tree to see a Felineness creature. Having 5 tails black and red fur. Fangs the length of ones middle finger but yet the body of a well figured model with the face to match. In actuality it was a beautiful humanoid cat. The creature lowered itself from the tree on all fours, then sprang on its hind legs.
“Zou zar not frum zee’s lands what tis zy biding in zee lands?” The cat creature hissed at the strangers.
“We are only passing through. Nothing more than you attacked us we only acted in self defense. So please can you allow us to be on our way?” Strider responded to the creature.
“Z-I- cannot letz zee pass. By zee bidingz of lordz Eppy. Nowz preparez to diez but zont feel badz for no one haz ever survived Hell Cat number 18!” The Cat creature continued to his.
“Okay you then leave us no choice, we have to slay you foul creature!” Strider yelled at the Cat. Pulling out a stick from his garb it extended into a staff. The staff had a very weird looking point; it was in the form of a golden “V” similar to the ones on the heads of Gundams. Twirling the staff Strider was prepared to face off against the beast.
“Itz not zat zimple you seez zhey call me number 18 for a reazon. Here iz zhe reason! Multiplez!!” The cat creature then began to jerk as two of itself emerged from itself. This continued until there were 18 of the creatures forming a circle around the four companions.
Dudeman quickly turned his back and was back to back with Kuwa. Flying Monkey turned 180 as he was now back to back with Strider, the four then bunched up together and were all four back to back.
“Okay here is the deal, who here has actual combat skills?” Asked Strider.
“I was trained in the art of swordsmanship in the village by some of the older towns folks…” Replied Kuwa.
“Well I mostly hang out and hunt all day, I know how to wield a bow and arrow and any other projectile weapon I suppose. But I don’t think I can actually fight…” Dudeman said nervously.
“Um… I am not much of a fighter, I am just a scout…”
“Good enough for me!” Strider said quickly. “Now let me see… I got it! Optional Armaments!!!” Strider yelled out. Then suddenly in Kuwa’s hands a sword appeared made of the finest alloy in the blade, the hilt was encrusted with rubies. In Dudemans hands a bow appeared the string was made of concentrated silk, a silk quiver appeared behind his back while arrows filled it up, the body of the arrows was made up of mulberry composites and the tips of the same alloy as the sword. “Now Vader you get up high and watch us from above, Kuwa you take the six over there Dudeman you handle the six over there and I’ll take the six in front of me, NOW MOVE OUT!” Strider ordered.
The 18 Hell Cats split up into three squads one for each of the warriors carrying weapons. 3 surrounded Strider from the rear and 3 from the front. They then pounced onto Strider who smirked.
“Your all physical, doesn’t say much about your intellect… Phase Shift!” a sort of protective barrier surrounded Strider then it absorbed into his skin. The cat’s claws did nothing against him he simply began to strike them viciously with his staff.
Kuwa did not have as much luck with them as Strider. They were fast and ferocious he wasn’t used to fighting multiple enemies at once. He swung the sword in front of him, it leaped using its fast reflexes then one clawed him from the back. He turned then another sung its fangs into his foot the blood gushed then another jumped from the rear and clawed his back. Turning one sunk its fangs into his wrist the sword fell; they piled on top of him and began a little feast. Kuwa’s blood trickled from across his body, his eyes went blank…
Dudeman was having better luck then Kuwa. Putting his back against a tree he had Vader tell him where to aim. Firing the arrows with only brief seconds of intermission between them. He was like a machine this was all thanks to his prowess as a hunter. “Kuwa don’t jerk!” Dudeman said as he fired an arrow which pierced the head of one of the cats on Kuwa. Going in through the feline’s ear it went right through the cats head piercing its brain. The cat let out an ear popping screech as the arrow came out of the other ear with the cats brain on the tip. A “splosh” was heard as the brain hit the tree with the arrows tip in it.
Kuwa’s eyes were still blank as he dashed towards his sword. Spinning his sword in one motion he beheaded one of the cats. The body jerked around aimlessly then stepping on the head the insides of the cats head splattered all around the other hungry feline’s surrounded the dead cat’s boy. They began to grub on the body of their fallen comrade. The main Hellcat called them all to it, then they became one once more.
“Zoo are much zstronger then I’s ezxpectedz. I needz somez azzisztance. Come Dogzmatix!” The Hellcat hissed bleeding.
A howl was heard from afar then it go louder and louder and louder. With a BOOM a canine Cerberus with 3 heads appeared. The drool leaking from its jaws hit the floor and the ground began to dissolve its drool was some sort of acidic liquid the creature was fierce with bloodshot eyes. Its gazed fixed on Strider the strongest of the bunch, the canine has a fetish with powerful people it lusted to devour them. Having their power flow through him as he takes away their power and merged it with his.
One of the heads looked at Strider. “You are delectable!” the gruff voiced boomed in the woodlands.
Readying itself to pounce, Strider also readied his staff. Kuwa twirled his sword as the Hellcat began to multiply Dudeman took aim. Then the sounds off all of their foots were heard scrambling across the woodlands heading for each other, the canine leaped into the air and strider leaped they were going to collide in the air, Dudeman fired 3 volleys of arrows at the 8 Cats who surrounded him. While Kuwa jumped into the middle of the 8 who was to fight him.
Vader closed his eyes as he flew into a tree to hide from the battle…
To be continued!!!
dudeman
October 26th, 2005, 06:27 PM
Wow man this story keeps getting better and better keep it up.
falling-angel-111
October 26th, 2005, 06:36 PM
i really liked it keep up the good work :happy:
Dark's Angel
October 26th, 2005, 07:20 PM
This is getting better and better. I really liked it. :happy:
Honeybee
October 26th, 2005, 07:46 PM
im think im in love with this story O.O i must have more!
Miyu
October 26th, 2005, 08:11 PM
-_- calm dmn HB.......I MUST KNOW MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CabbitGirl
October 26th, 2005, 09:43 PM
keep it coming =^_^= this stuff it good
Kuwabara
October 27th, 2005, 12:16 PM
Thanks. My favortie part of this chapter was when the arrow went clean through one of the HC's head. And when the cats decided to eat the headless one.
Honeybee
October 27th, 2005, 07:03 PM
okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay then just post the next one ! ^ ^
slippers
October 27th, 2005, 07:26 PM
it's addictive @_@ i've been reading it ever since you decided to add my name in, and believe it or not the story is really good ^_^; although flying monkey of darth and vader thing is little..eh..:p
did you make up as you go or have you already planned how its going to end? :happy:
Kuwabara
October 28th, 2005, 06:41 PM
I have the ending in my head and the beginning the middle of how one thing goes to another is... Made up as i go along :meh:
Godgrave
October 30th, 2005, 11:05 AM
Ok ok, but is slippers gonna be on the good side or the dark side ? *pokes Kuwa*
Interesting read, this.
Sabe
October 30th, 2005, 11:53 PM
I'm curious as to where I will be found...this story is good, Kuwabara, keep it coming!
wamaru
October 31st, 2005, 07:11 PM
I must say this is really good ,yes
Honeybee
October 31st, 2005, 07:48 PM
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrvvvvvvvvveeeeee you kuwa
plz post more for me
*bates eyelashes*
Tanoro
October 31st, 2005, 08:18 PM
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrvvvvvvvvveeeeee you kuwa
plz post more for me
*bates eyelashes*
*sniffs* What about me? :(
..........:p
Honeybee
October 31st, 2005, 11:22 PM
*girly scream*
TANNNNNNNNNYYYYYYYY YOUR BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYYYY!!!!!!!
*HUGGLES!* where were! you!
Kuwabara
November 1st, 2005, 02:48 PM
I have more coming... But couldn't type cause lack of power... Due to Hurricaine wilma.
Slippers role will be Maybe Dark side...
Aroura
November 1st, 2005, 04:44 PM
You're ok, that's the important thing.
falling-angel-111
November 1st, 2005, 05:06 PM
yeah if you died we wouldnt know how the story ends :meh: just joking im glad your ok :happy:
Honeybee
November 1st, 2005, 09:30 PM
hurricane im sry whew glad your okay ^ ^
slippers
November 2nd, 2005, 04:05 PM
thanks double g for asking. i was wondering that myself :mwaha:
Slippers role will be Maybe Dark side...
i thought so. you cant make everyone a hero. that's no fun :p
Kuwabara
November 3rd, 2005, 01:00 PM
Yup I am fine. I am almost done with the next chapter!
Princess Tasha
November 4th, 2005, 01:44 AM
Hurry up....or I'll start posting my story instead! ^_^
Honeybee
November 4th, 2005, 09:46 PM
hurry plz !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrveee your stories so much ! ^ ^
Flying_Monkey
November 5th, 2005, 03:21 PM
I can't believe this Kuwa you made me a friggin pansy! why why why did you have to make me all weak! you could have made me a Flying monkey Martial Artist or a Flying Monkey Shaman or soemthing cool like that but a weak little prick who cowars behind everyone else while they fight! OMFG I'm very disapointed in the role I have in your story!
But other than my beef witht he way you made my character in the story its really friggin good I like 18 in the story friggin awesome...
Princess Tasha
November 6th, 2005, 11:00 AM
hurry plz !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrveee your stories so much ! ^ ^
Was that directed at me or Kuwabara?
Flying_Monkey
November 7th, 2005, 03:04 PM
I'm thinking it was for Kuwa, Miss Tasha.
Stupid weak flying monkey character. Kuwa your gonna get an earful from me for making the Flying_Monkey a weakling! And hurry up witht he story dang it!
Gundam-Ranger-X
November 7th, 2005, 03:19 PM
Don't blame the author. Blame the inspiration for the character. :meh:
Azrael
November 7th, 2005, 03:40 PM
:rolleyes: Get over it. Monkeys are tiny to begin with; could you really picture one holding its own in a fight against a bunch of humanoid panthers?
Honeybee
November 7th, 2005, 06:48 PM
O.O i just realized how wierd this convo sounds...
Princess Tasha
November 7th, 2005, 07:24 PM
Well fine...guess no one is wanting to even give me any comments on my story. :(
Aroura
November 7th, 2005, 07:42 PM
Most stories don't get comented on at all. That's why I never post any of mine.
Honeybee
November 7th, 2005, 07:47 PM
*nod* so true so true
and if we were to comment on yours it wouldn't be fair since this is Kuwa's topic.
Miyu
November 9th, 2005, 08:36 PM
0.o you guys are all very crazy and in human........owell that's why we're all here right?
Flying_Monkey
November 9th, 2005, 09:43 PM
:rolleyes: Get over it. Monkeys are tiny to begin with; could you really picture one holding its own in a fight against a bunch of humanoid panthers?
Size has nothing to do with the ability to kick some panther ass... :meh:
Tanoro
November 9th, 2005, 10:24 PM
I'm curious as to where I will come in. I hope I'm a spellcaster of some kind since that's what I really am. :D
Honeybee
November 10th, 2005, 12:32 AM
*still pondering her role*
the suspence is killing me XP ahhhhhhhhhh!!!
Shinra Soldier88
November 14th, 2005, 08:25 PM
Wow, this is good, makes me wish I were a vet than the new guy so I could be in it!
Flying_Monkey
November 14th, 2005, 08:40 PM
*points finger* A new person!!! 0.0
Kuwa need to hurry up wioth the next instalment of the story already!... I'm getting impatient....
Honeybee
November 15th, 2005, 12:54 AM
Kuuuuuuuuuuuuuwwwwwwwwwwwwyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!
Cooooommmmmmeeee Onnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!
Princess Tasha
November 15th, 2005, 01:27 AM
*points finger* A new person!!! 0.0
Kuwa need to hurry up wioth the next instalment of the story already!... I'm getting impatient....
I agree 100%...another chapter is soooo needed.
Link
November 15th, 2005, 04:28 PM
why am i not in it???:(
Mimiru
November 16th, 2005, 02:53 PM
hes posted earlier that evryone was in it, link.
Flying_Monkey
November 16th, 2005, 03:38 PM
and he also mentioned that those who have their names posted up in the red will be characters that play a s0omewhat important role in some cases... or something liek that... Link...
Honeybee
November 18th, 2005, 07:58 PM
i cant take it anymore ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i need to read the next part! i hope its extra long for the extra wait.
lil'-blackkitten
November 20th, 2005, 04:12 PM
i like it so far very nice kuwabara. Note; why is every one whom isn't in the story complaining about it? just be glad he's actually making something like this
Mimiru
November 20th, 2005, 07:18 PM
Becasue we ARE the AC. everyone wants in.
Princess Tasha
November 21st, 2005, 10:56 AM
And we need to read another chapter...the suspense is too much *scarfs down a whole box of chocolates*.
Flying_Monkey
November 21st, 2005, 06:43 PM
Becasue we ARE the AC. everyone wants in.
especially members who have been around for a while... want in...
I'm already in so I'm happy though I don't get to kick butt...:(
Tanoro
November 22nd, 2005, 12:34 AM
Not everyone can be an @$$kicker in a story. Too much chivalry is boring. By the way, has anyone seen Kuwa in the past week?
Flying_Monkey
November 22nd, 2005, 12:48 PM
True...and Kuwa has disappeared... I haven't seen him on at all for a long while...
Aroura
November 22nd, 2005, 06:37 PM
FA hasn't been around either..
Honeybee
November 22nd, 2005, 07:39 PM
i think he doesnt have the story so he is trying to escape -_-...
j/k
dudeman
November 23rd, 2005, 02:07 AM
True...and Kuwa has disappeared... I haven't seen him on at all for a long while... Yeah man he hasn't even been on AIM or his rpg board for awhile.
Honeybee
November 23rd, 2005, 02:09 AM
now im worried
dudeman
November 23rd, 2005, 02:17 AM
now im worried Meh his computer probably just crashed again.
Honeybee
November 23rd, 2005, 02:18 AM
*deep breaths* if u say so...
Tanoro
November 24th, 2005, 07:41 PM
I just heard from Kuwa. His internet access was down. He has finished the new chapter. He just needs to proofread it and then he'll post it.
Kuwabara
November 25th, 2005, 11:09 PM
Strider and the Canine clashed in midair chomping down its jaws upon the man Strider quickly held his jaws open with his staff. The Canine beast was brusque and colossal using its sheer brute strengths it over powered the man throwing his full weight on the staff and man they fell to the ground. The canine was in the dominant position atop of the warrior… the saliva dripping from the canines jaws began to dissolve the staff within its mouth. Quickly rolling backwards and away from the beast Strider leaped towards a branch on a tree. “Dog’s can not climb trees last I recall so it would seem I am at an advantage.” Strider said quite boastfully. Dogmatix showed no sign of content on his face, he was being taunted and the worst fact of al was that it was true. He could not climb a tree, now it was time to be creative. The canine howled and spat the acidic substance from within his mouth which hit the trunk of the tree and quickly did away with the tree entirely. Strider being a man of quick reflexes was already on another tree which was dissolved the same way, tree after tree.
Whilst those two were fighting Kuwa had his hands filled with the 6 felines that surrounded him. One pounced behind of him as Kuwa ducked it went flying into another feline. His stunt as brilliant as it might seem was flawed… he was now on the ground and the cats pounced in unison as they all began to claw and rip his skin as though a starching post. The blood was trickling down Kuwa’s body then it happened. His eyes went blank once more; he was now in his “ZONE”. Kuwa launched into the air shaking off the beast from around him. “What tis zees powerz comingz fffrrom?” the Main Hellcat asked. “Vee willz kill em nowz!” 3 of the cats leaped into near by trees as Kuwa landed on the ground two of them began to encircle him as one was making her way towards him.
Dudeman had his hands full as he was running out of arrows. The cats were now faster than usual as they were dodging all of his attacks. They were of the feline animal family so there agility was unmatched especially by a human. Dudeman put his hands on his last arrow, he gulped this one would be his last arrow before he would have to begin close quarters combat which was now his specialty. Putting the arrow within his bow he pulled back the string, took aim at the nearest cat and began to gently release the arrow. In one foul move he turned around and released the arrow. It hit a nearby cat within its diaphragm; the cat fell to the ground dead. “Suckers! You thought I was actually going to attack the one I was originally aiming for? Obviously not cause he would have dodged so I hit the one I have been secretly tracking for some time now!” Dudeman stuck his tongue out at the felines which angered them. They all rushed in without a moment’s hesitation, Dudeman had no more arrows so he turned 180 and high-tailed. But they were closing in on him.
“Just give in you will never catch me at this rate. Soon you’re going to have a dry mouth and then I’ll kill you!” Strider continued to taunt the Dog. Dogmatix could take it no longer. He began to draw in some weird type of energy from all around, his cheeks began to puff up and then he released it. A huge ball of acidic saliva went soaring from his mouth and stopped above Strider. Strider could do nothing but watch in shock at this feat, and then the ball exploded and fell to every tree within Striders jumping range. All of the trees quickly melted as they were melting Dogmatix who was quite a distance away from Striders tree was now beneath it as he chomped it down. “Minovsky!” Yelled Strider as he began to descend, some white fog haze began to fill the area around Strider as he was now enshrouded by it. Dogmatix could no longer see him; Strider was now deliberating upon his next move. He seemed to have forgotten that Canines have a distinct sense of smell. Before he knew what was going on he was being pounced on, some sort of liquid fell on his arm… Strider than shrieked out in pain! It was the acid from the mouth of the canine. The haze cleared and it was now visible the Canine was on top of Strider and was drooling his acidic saliva on the man’s arms. “Not so big and bad now are you?!” The Canine said in his forever gruff voice.
Dudeman continued his scampering until he tripped on the root of a tree. Falling onto the floor fast and hard. The 5 cats pounced on him and began chewing away; they were ripping his skin right from his bones. Dudeman was now crying out! The cats were remorseless as they laughed at his crying and fear without breaking from there devouring of him. Dudeman tried to crawl but to no avail as they began to chew his elbows. He gave in and fell to the floor waiting to be consumed.
Kuwa was having better luck then his comrades. He was holding the cats back, for the time being until his eyes began filling up with life once more. His pupils could now be seen again as one of the cats noticed this it knocked the sword from his hands. Seeing this, the other Cats pounced on him once more. Then it was heard by everyone the screech of a hawk. It began to hover around the whole battle field observing with its hawk eyes. It was now descending into the battlefield; everyone was awed by its beauty. As it was descending it seemed to be getting bigger and bigger until it was the size of a man.
“About time…” Strider said as Dogmatix jumped from him and looked at the hawk man.
“About time? What is that suppose to mean?” the Hawk said in a voice that sounded like that of a woman’s.
“Zhis iz notz zhe time to be socializing! Killz zhe bird!” The main hellcat commanded as one of the Hellcats moved from Dudeman towards the hawk. That single cat multiplied 18 times. “Shocked? Yez zhis is very shocking to youz… every onez of the hellcat clones can multiply 18 timez and there clonez can… vees are the main trooopz of h’ellz army after all.”
“Nothing I can’t handle, though it is a bother.” The hawk transformed to a beautiful maiden. She was tall even taller than Strider she stood at 6’5, her hands began to glow. “Be gone!” she shouted as all of the hellcats and Dogmatix were scattered away to all directions. The wind carried them all away not just a few fetes or meters but miles away.
“Who are you?” Asked Kuwa from the floor.
“I am Lady Dubird. Member of the Ancient clan. I see you have already made friend with Strider and seeing how he came here with you… That means he is in search of me, I am ready to go with you guys but not yet. Master Eppy has taken over this forest in the name of God Grave and I will not leave until I release them. Now come we must make haste before they return with reinforcements. The trio was levitated and Lady Dubird as well they were instantly teleported into a house high in the sky.
dudeman
November 25th, 2005, 11:24 PM
Brilliant man brilliant. Thi story just gets better and better however you didn't seem to mention flying monkey much in this chapter.
Eppy
November 25th, 2005, 11:33 PM
yay!! that was a good comeback kuwabara =^_^= nice new chapter!
dammit! i did it again! this is cabbit ^^;
Princess Tasha
November 26th, 2005, 11:55 AM
Sweet.
Tanoro
November 26th, 2005, 02:52 PM
dammit! i did it again! this is cabbit ^^;
LOL! Sorry, but that's just funny. :D
falling-angel-111
November 26th, 2005, 10:45 PM
it was definately worth the wait. keep up the good work kuwa.
CabbitGirl
November 26th, 2005, 10:48 PM
yesh! keep up the good work =^_^=
hehe i made sure it was my name this time
Gundam-Ranger-X
November 27th, 2005, 03:55 PM
*was watching "The Ghost and the Darkness" while reading the update*
Not bad, but it could have used more GRX :meh:
daymost
November 28th, 2005, 06:15 PM
Hay you alive and your chapter rocks
EVA-01
November 28th, 2005, 06:32 PM
I like it...EVEN THOUGH I;'M SDTILL NOT IN THEIR! T_T
Seriously, pretty good. ;P
CabbitGirl
November 28th, 2005, 11:37 PM
well neither am i, but hey. he'll get around to it probably
Kuwabara
November 29th, 2005, 01:01 PM
GRX oddly enough you were in the original ending of the chapter... But I decided to put you in the opening of the next one.
Eva your role comes in about the same time as Falling_Angel and Tanoro. Cabby I think you will be in the next chapter... :haha: It's so funny what I have planned for the Cabbit X'D
Tanoro
November 29th, 2005, 01:28 PM
Now I'm curious. I wanna see what he'll do to Cabbit. X'D
Flying_Monkey
November 29th, 2005, 01:45 PM
Hey you didn't mention me making some sort of sacrifice and jumping down upon one of them hallcats and bashing it over the head with my smacking stick.... next time though yes next time... heheheh
Now I'm just dreaming... But good I like the fight scenes they is awesome...
CabbitGirl
November 29th, 2005, 05:07 PM
now i wanna see the next chapter badly.....
falling-angel-111
November 29th, 2005, 05:37 PM
yay! i get to be in the story, i cant wait to see what he does with cabbit. lol
Sabe
November 29th, 2005, 08:06 PM
I'm slowly beginning to wonder if I should fear my arrival...But I am looking forward to the next installment nonetheless!
Aroura
November 29th, 2005, 08:23 PM
Heh, I know what you mean.. My character will probably end up a bad guy that dies the first time they are shown -_-;
Gundam-Ranger-X
November 30th, 2005, 07:31 AM
now i wanna see the next chapter badly.....
So do I.
Azrael
November 30th, 2005, 08:15 AM
*ants in pants to know when he shows up*
Heh, I know what you mean.. My character will probably end up a bad guy that dies the first time they are shown -_-;
Nah...yours sounds like a good guy name, or at worst a neutral name.
Aroura
November 30th, 2005, 07:48 PM
Heh true...
Flying_Monkey
December 1st, 2005, 04:34 PM
I can't wait to see what happens to Cabbit...
Honeybee
December 3rd, 2005, 05:00 AM
^ lol ditto
love it Kuwa your a frickin genious(sp?)
Kuwabara
December 6th, 2005, 06:54 PM
I am almost done with it... And people are going to die starting in the next chapter...
Flying_Monkey
December 6th, 2005, 07:00 PM
oh oh make me die I wanna die! but I wanna die in a funny way!
Gundam-Ranger-X
December 6th, 2005, 07:34 PM
Bad guys always die first. Oh well. CanI at least get a cool death?
Flying_Monkey
December 6th, 2005, 07:57 PM
I think just to humiliate him GRX shoutl be killed by the Flying monkey.... heheheh
Gundam-Ranger-X
December 6th, 2005, 08:29 PM
Wouldn't humiliate me. But it would make Kuwa want to not walk by any dark alleys and constantly watch his back. :laugh: j/k It's Kuwa's story. He can kill me any way he wants.
Gundam-Ranger-X
December 19th, 2005, 02:42 PM
Hey Kuwa, when are you going to post the next chapter?
CabbitGirl
December 19th, 2005, 11:46 PM
*anticipation building* POP!
yesh yesh yesh. postie postie? is it done yet?
Aroura
December 20th, 2005, 12:38 AM
He hasn't been around in a while, wonder what happened... =\
Honeybee
December 20th, 2005, 04:16 AM
cant..........take much.......more! @_@
must see........story!
Tanoro
December 20th, 2005, 04:05 PM
Lol! Honeybee needs a bedtime story with lots of blood, guts, and gore! X'D
Flying_Monkey
December 25th, 2005, 08:27 PM
Kuwa seems to love making us all wait... we're like abounch of addicts begging for our next fix X'D
Princess Tasha
December 26th, 2005, 12:33 AM
*holds hands out* Gimme gimme gimme....please. :)
Tanoro
December 26th, 2005, 01:04 PM
Kuwa is gonna have the single longest-running thread on AC if this keeps up. Give him some good ratings, everyone! :D It seems like I'm the only one that has given it any stars. :p
GundamFreakX
December 26th, 2005, 06:46 PM
This story is hella-awesome. Now I'm anxious to know the rest of the story.
Gundam-Ranger-X
December 26th, 2005, 07:44 PM
Kuwa is gonna have the single longest-running thread on AC if this keeps up. Give him some good ratings, everyone! :D It seems like I'm the only one that has given it any stars. :p
He'll have to get another 10 pages or so.
GundamFreakX
December 27th, 2005, 02:04 AM
Probably be the end of the school year be4 we get to see the end of this one.
Kuwabara
January 2nd, 2006, 12:55 PM
^_^: Back from my little R & R Christmas break. And with that said expect a chapter later today or tommorrow. And one more thing! GundamFreakX o.O that is so cool someone else to add to the X squad. And FM you don't want to die... Cause if you do die DX is killing ye and I pride myself on how DX kills people.
Princess Tasha
January 2nd, 2006, 07:13 PM
I hope I don't die.....
Flying_Monkey
January 3rd, 2006, 03:19 PM
ok then no dying for me unless its in a cool way that everyone will remember... heheheh
Honeybee
January 4th, 2006, 01:52 AM
i wouldn't really mind if fm died.....j/k or am i?
im happy as long as you put me in it eventually :) and you post often!
Lance
January 4th, 2006, 10:02 PM
i have 22 chapters in the first fan fic i am writing 0-o
Flying_Monkey
January 5th, 2006, 07:03 AM
yeah thats nice Lance person...
Hurry Kuwa I need my next fix!
Kuwabara
January 5th, 2006, 12:59 PM
>.> FM you die nasty and uncool :meh:
j/k I haven't decided who to kill yet, well I know someone is dying in this chapter very cool like.
Flying_Monkey
January 5th, 2006, 08:24 PM
me me me!!!! please make me die please!!!!!! I begs you!
Honeybee
January 6th, 2006, 07:13 PM
^wow -_- die lover odddddddnessss
Flying_Monkey
January 7th, 2006, 05:40 PM
Hey death is not something to be afraid of... but its not really good to welcome it either... XD
Soji Okita
January 7th, 2006, 07:34 PM
Dude this story is so awesome can i be added in please please please please please please please?!?!?!?!?!?!? I know i haven't posted alot or anything(i'm going to though) but all i ask is just to be in at least one chapter or 2 or 3..... OR 27!!!!
yay!! that was a good comeback kuwabara =^_^= nice new chapter!
Off Topic:
dammit! i did it again! this is cabbit ^^;
Cabbit are you and Eppy the same person?!?!
just had to get the question out of my system ^_^:
CabbitGirl
January 7th, 2006, 09:30 PM
Cabbit are you and Eppy the same person?!?!
just had to get the question out of my system ^_^:
no ^^;; hes my older brother and i happened to be using his laptop and didnt realize he was the one signed in and not me
Princess Tasha
January 8th, 2006, 10:54 AM
*sits down with a tub of popcorn and waits for the next chapter*
Shinra Soldier88
January 8th, 2006, 04:04 PM
Wow, it's been a while since the last chapter... i wonder who'll be introduced and exited...
Gundam-Ranger-X
January 9th, 2006, 07:29 AM
Hey Kuwa, where's that chapter you promissed us?
Tanoro
January 9th, 2006, 09:26 AM
I'm sure it'll be here soon. We just need to be patient. I'm rather curious to see how he writes me into it.
Flying_Monkey
January 9th, 2006, 06:14 PM
yeah I'm curious about who will die cause I think he said someone is gonna die possibly in this chapter... I hope its me... XD
Shinra Soldier88
January 11th, 2006, 07:44 PM
I'm just hoping for the next chapter!
Honeybee
January 11th, 2006, 11:54 PM
still waiting :sad: *sigh* i wish it was here...
Tanoro
January 12th, 2006, 12:34 AM
still waiting :sad: *sigh* i wish it was here...
Awww! :snuggle: It's ok, Bee. We just need patience and a mob to hunt down Kuwabara.
Honeybee
January 12th, 2006, 10:36 PM
ive got the mob :D
but the patience uhhhhhhhhhh...
Shinra Soldier88
January 12th, 2006, 11:17 PM
Just make sure the hands that are writing this thing are left on the owner otherwise we'll never know at all! ...so whats the plan?...
Dubird
January 12th, 2006, 11:42 PM
6'5?....*giggles*......that's hilarious!.....though, i prefer cats, that's ok...after all, that's what my name suggests, and at least you didn't make me a 'dubird'....*it's a little creature i draw*....
and may i suggest also posting this on fanfiction.net?....it's kinda annoying to have to surf through all the pages to find the next chapter...if it's posted there too, it's easier to read.....*is waiting for the next chapter8....
Tanoro
January 13th, 2006, 01:05 AM
Or he can do what I did with my smilies section that has since miraculously disappeared from the archives. I merely linked my updates here to a page elsewhere where my smilies were listed together.
Flying_Monkey
January 13th, 2006, 05:46 PM
...I hate waiting it creates too much suspence and I can't handle that!... gah!!! HB lets get this mob going after Kuwabar already! *pulls out a bat with long nails sticking out of it...*
Godgrave
January 14th, 2006, 07:22 AM
I can't wait to see myself battle with the good side muhuhahahaha *laughs with a sparkle in his eye*
GundamFreakX
January 16th, 2006, 02:07 PM
Oh, cool. I'm in...NOW BRING IT ON! Hurry up, Kuwa! AAAAAAAAAAH!
daymost
January 17th, 2006, 09:43 PM
Did some say mob well pitchforks for eve body:D
^_^: Back from my little R & R Christmas break. And with that said expect a chapter later today or tommorrow. And one more thing! GundamFreakX o.O that is so cool someone else to add to the X squad. And FM you don't want to die... Cause if you do die DX is killing ye and I pride myself on how DX kills people.
Stop playing with me:x
Honeybee
January 19th, 2006, 09:08 PM
lol seems like the mob is almost done
now will A-G please go to the pitchfork secion
H-L to the bomb section
M-U to the mace/pepper spray section
V-Z to the pom pom section (rally the troops up XD!)
WE ATTACK SOON
Flying_Monkey
January 20th, 2006, 04:49 PM
ok then I'll lead the charge with Mr. Spikey...
Hurry Kuwa well don't comprimise the goodnesss of the story though... just get something up here gah! even if its just a little paragraph...
Kuwabara
February 14th, 2006, 02:13 PM
-_-; o.o; I'm back... *Pulls out pen and paper* I'm back for good this time so expect the next chapter soon! Seriously this time.
*Runs from the mob while writing*
falling-angel-111
February 14th, 2006, 03:14 PM
yay! I can't wait to see it! *dances* ^_^
Aroura
February 14th, 2006, 07:59 PM
Good to know your not dead n.n
Shinra Soldier88
February 15th, 2006, 03:10 PM
... We may finally know what happens next... PUT THE PEN AND PAPER AWAY AND START TYPING ALREADY!!!
CabbitGirl
February 15th, 2006, 04:58 PM
sure, thats what you said last time :p
like the boy who cried wolf
Honeybee
February 16th, 2006, 12:24 AM
Okay MOB CEASE FOR NOW AND SURROUND THE PARIMITER (sp?) IF TRIES TO ESCAPE WILL HUNT HIM DOWN!!!
*patiently waits while playing chinesse checkers*
Kelini
February 16th, 2006, 12:38 PM
the story's really good i dont really mind not being in it after all i am a noob at this site...
Flying_Monkey
February 16th, 2006, 05:47 PM
... *smacks Kuwa over the head just for good measure* Keep writing or I'll smack you with Mr. Spikey
Gundam-Ranger-X
February 20th, 2006, 05:14 AM
Suprise, suprise. No update.
Flying_Monkey
February 21st, 2006, 10:21 PM
This is getting really old really fast... we need more story not more promises that you will give us more story I wanna see results man!
Kuwabara
February 23rd, 2006, 09:34 PM
DX and GRX arrived in the forest about 5 minutes after Lady Dubird rescued the trio. Looking around the X duo knew a battle was held here and by the looks of it lots of blood spill. Looking around GRX spotted the Hellcat as well as Dogmatix, in a flash they were next to the two beasts.
“Are they dead?” Gundam Ranger X asked them.
Dogmatix shook his head in a no gesture and a snarl escaped DX as he glared at them. Dogmatix lowered his head in shame of not defeating them when he had the perfect change. GRX shook his head in pity knowing what would ensue; DX was going to blow his top again.
“Let me get this straight… with all the power you two have, you lost? The Legendary beast from hell lost, why am I not surprised, at this failure?”
“Zir vee didz zee bezt vee couldz do.” Hellcat responded to DX, GRX shook a bye bye to HC. DX grabbed the feline by the throat as his free hand began to transform into a blade, Dogmatix let out a low growl but with a glare from DX and the canine’s previous wounds from fighting Strider Matix just laid there.
“You have no excuse; if you can’t live to do what you were brought here to do you shouldn’t waste anymore of the air I breathe.” The blade arm was brought across the throat of the feline as its body fell to the ground DX held its head in his hand.
“Failure will not be tolerated.” He threw the head right smack at Dogmatix the canine was hit right in the head. “Get him Ranger,”
Gundam Ranger’s arms transformed into two barrels as it fired upon a tree, a little cabbit fell out of it. You could tell upon looking at it, it was a girl in her mid teens about 16 years of age. She stood up to about 4’3 on her back legs and looked at the two and was trembling. Deathscythe licked his lips and look at her.
“It’s been a while since I had Cabbit…” with saying that she stooped down and hopped up into a three and began to hop for dear life taking great leaps. She now couldn’t see them behind her and suddenly her ears were grabbed by GRX.
“We are going to eat you my dear.” He said calmly into her ears.
“I’ll kill you swiftly to not cause you pain!” With saying that he was pelted with rocks as the winged Simeon came down from the skies. “Let her go!” Screamed Flying Monkey GRX simply laughed and fired a shot at the Monkey. It wasn’t a big shot so when it hit him he fell to the ground but still conscious his tail wrapped around a tree branch before he fell to the ground. The Cabbit stepped on his foot and he released her, she quickly hopped towards Flying Monkey.
“Let’s go I’ll hop as high as I can and you take it from there I hope I am not to heavy.” She leapt into the air and GRX leapt after her he was going to pull her down but she held onto flying Monkey who began to flap his wings and elevated them upwards just out of his grasp.
“Eh, I’ll have to wait another day I guess.” He went back towards DX who just finished scolding Dogmatix.
“Let’s go see Lord Eppy Ranger” The two as if the wind were now gone from Dogmatix.
Kuwabara opened his eyes and he was in a room looking to his left Strider was speaking to Lady Dubird and on his right Dudeman was laying on the bed next to his. “Where are we?”
CabbitGirl
February 23rd, 2006, 10:15 PM
w00t! it aint much but its something =^_^=
Kuwabara
February 23rd, 2006, 10:48 PM
I know, I am just giving something to hold off until the next installment, that was part of the next chapter the beginning anyways.
Shinra Soldier88
February 24th, 2006, 12:12 AM
Sweet, this is getting better and better Kuwabara!I can't wait to see who else gets introduced and done away with! Or who the real hero will be, perhaps heroine... I just hope you have some plan for this next part, so we don't have to wait another 2 or so months!
Sabe
February 24th, 2006, 12:39 AM
Looking pretty schweet, Kuwa-chan...Looking forward to my entrance, needless to say!
Flying_Monkey
February 24th, 2006, 03:20 PM
Flying Monkey rains rocks from above!
Yay I'm a hero! I saved cabbit! *does victory dance* and I hit Ranger with rocks I'm proud of meself!
This so far is my favorite part of the story just cause I threw rocks at GRX and DX
CabbitGirl
February 24th, 2006, 06:06 PM
wooo! my hero!! =^_^=
wamaru
February 26th, 2006, 10:08 AM
Very nice job!
falling-angel-111
February 26th, 2006, 11:14 AM
*cries* you finally post it and I don't even have the time to read it! *cries more*
dudeman
February 26th, 2006, 05:26 PM
Nice job Kuwa! It was short, but it was great and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Welcome back Kuwa!
Flying_Monkey
February 27th, 2006, 05:29 PM
wooo! my hero!! =^_^=
:D Just call me Super FM hahahah
Honeybee
February 28th, 2006, 02:08 AM
aww cabbit almost was killed :{
hope your next installment comes in soon ^ ^
Nice job Kuwa! It was short, but it was great and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
^ ditto
CabbitGirl
February 28th, 2006, 11:04 PM
:D Just call me Super FM hahahah
hehe *cough*look at siggy*cough*
Honeybee
February 28th, 2006, 11:09 PM
^ lol XD
Flying_Monkey
March 1st, 2006, 01:30 AM
Super FM has powers comparable to wonderboy...
Gundam-Ranger-X
March 1st, 2006, 07:39 AM
*wonders if super flying monkeys taste better then the regular flying kind* Hmmmmm.... *hungry look twoards FM*
Flying_Monkey
March 1st, 2006, 06:24 PM
...oh crap... *puts a truck load of pies infront of GRX* Eat pie not teh Monkey
Gundam-Ranger-X
March 1st, 2006, 09:18 PM
Monkey pie?
falling-angel-111
March 2nd, 2006, 12:59 PM
Yay I finally got to read it! Cabbit is so cute, I can't wait to see the next one!
Flying_Monkey
March 2nd, 2006, 03:14 PM
Monkey pie?
No monkey, just pie.
GundamFreakX
March 3rd, 2006, 11:00 AM
This installment was good, and now I'm in more anticipation for the next.
Honeybee
March 3rd, 2006, 08:02 PM
ditto im thrilled for the next one!
Tanoro
March 29th, 2006, 10:01 AM
Kuwa hasn't been on AC since late Feb. Has anyone seen him?
Aroura
March 29th, 2006, 12:19 PM
Nope, he dissapears alot...
Princess Tasha
March 29th, 2006, 01:19 PM
Tell you guys what...I'll start writing another story (already have some ideas) and I will start posting til he comes back and everyone starts reading his story instead. ^_^
Kuwabara
March 29th, 2006, 06:54 PM
Hey! I'm on AIM almost everyday >.> Pop me an IM ery now and then, I've grown lazy. KAZUWABARA is the SN
CabbitGirl
March 29th, 2006, 10:09 PM
just because youre on AIM doesnt mean youre on here :p
and ill pop you some IMs then =^_^=
*nudge nudge poke poke*
dudeman
March 30th, 2006, 01:36 AM
Hey! I'm on AIM almost everyday >.> Pop me an IM ery now and then, I've grown lazy. KAZUWABARA is the SN Bullcrap, you're almost never on *pummels Kuwa*.
GundamFreakX
March 30th, 2006, 08:10 PM
come on people
EVA-01
March 30th, 2006, 08:36 PM
*CoughI'malwayson...XXAumaanAnubisXXcough*
Que dice? :3
GundamFreakX
March 31st, 2006, 11:15 AM
Oh well for me, I don't have AIM.
Flying_Monkey
April 2nd, 2006, 08:45 AM
Hey! I'm on AIM almost everyday >.> Pop me an IM ery now and then, I've grown lazy. KAZUWABARA is the SN
yeah i'll definatly be IMing you then... gotta keep you writing I'll be your motivation... or I'll figure out a way to scare you into creativity.. hacha!
I'm still Cabbits hero wooooooooooooo!!!!! the monkey still rocks!
CabbitGirl
April 3rd, 2006, 12:54 AM
I'm still Cabbits hero wooooooooooooo!!!!! the monkey still rocks!
indeed =D
kuwabara, you are always signed on, but mostly away. with all your time on the computer, you can deffinately find atleast 5 minutes a day to write a little bit of SOMETHING.
Kuwabara
April 6th, 2006, 03:45 PM
Another thing I have to say about that... Girl Friends are EVIL! But the enjoyable Evil. So yeah I think I'll have another chapter this week...end >.>
Flying_Monkey
April 6th, 2006, 10:52 PM
...ok then hurry up and stop fooling around... damn
CabbitGirl
April 6th, 2006, 11:44 PM
you have a life? no wait... you have a girlfriend??
scary...
Flying_Monkey
April 7th, 2006, 12:07 PM
X'D oh man thats pretty mean Cabbit! nice...
CabbitGirl
April 7th, 2006, 03:27 PM
what? i was suprised O_O
=^_^= keke
Flying_Monkey
April 7th, 2006, 08:46 PM
I kinda was too...
Gundam-Ranger-X
April 8th, 2006, 12:38 AM
I'm sceptical.
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